Editing down initial story

In the first animatic I did for the jerome story i kept the argument with the girlfriend at the beginning, seen through net curtains as you zoom into a building, before cutting to the a shot of jerome in front of the tv. Due to time restrictions had to edit this out. (See clip below)






Intro edited out from kimunkey on Vimeo
Below is the character design for the girlfriend done in Flash, from when I began thinking of this story in Dec.